first song of this month, hope it turned out ok. I'm trying to get used to adding vocals.
fish swim in the sink
oh wouldn't they look pretty in the ice rink
you break down and cry
oh wouldn't you
look better if you lied
I'll try not to change your mind
but different times will snag your line
leaving you alone and empty handed
I'll try not to change your mind
but empty halls will feed your binds
leaving you alone and empty handed
empty halls
and plaster walls
take it slow for me
I don't have much to my name
except these memories
we dance at the bar
oh wouldn't we
feel better in the car
getting far away from here
and thinking how to reappear
changing clothes and losing fear
pushing out the secret tears
smoothing out the hateful jokes
pushing blame to the same blokes
as it was before
@dukongp100 Apr 2022
i really like these vocals. youve done a good job with having the vocal melody dancing around with the synths. the drum beat is catchy and simple enough to work well with the overall instrumentation. i like that effect you used on the vocals in the chorus, has a sorta warping from speaker to speaker sound.
@jessi14 Feb 2022
I really like the lyrics, it's very poetic! I like the opening lines "fish swim in the sink, oh wouldn't they look pretty in the ice rink". Very creative!