The air is heavy
The sky is grey
I can’t breathe
Or run away
My body feels
Hard as stone
And I’m afraid
To be alone
The scars on me
Are angry and long
Proof that I
Am not that strong
Why does it hurt
So damn much
And when will I
Feel Death’s touch?
@roddy Feb 2022
Very good poetry. The lines 'Why does it hurt So damn much' are so conversational that they jump out and really reach the reader.
@tamsnumber4 Feb 2022
The first two verses are great and descriptive and very relatable. Love the scars being angry and long.