Ahahaha I'm very rusty and have forgotten how to harmonize. Only one of those key changes was intentional :D Also writing in Japanese because I feel like it.
No matter! Onwards!
恋の味は
甘く苦いよ
この強さは
消えてしまうの?
I’m not broken
それだけ
あなたに伝えたかったの
Loveの意味
見せてよ
怖いなんて思ってないよ!
勝手なことだと
わかってはいるけど
もう一回だけは
証拠したい
(Interlude)
「暇だから」って
言い訳許せない
人の気持ち
おもちゃじゃないと…
I’m not broken
それだけ
あなたに伝えたかったの
Loveの意味
見せてよ
怖いなんて思ってないよ!
勝手なことだと
わかってはいるけど
もう一回だけは
証拠したい!
@ambroise Apr 2022
Had to DeepL translate it and found that the lyrics is beautifull !
Unusuall chords progression feels nice as it translates the insecure love feelings of the narrator. Also, to my shame, I think I mistook it for a japanese musical tradition. Your guitar struming made me think of shamisen.
Loved the raw interpretation. In contrast songs in japanese I have heard have often a more pollished interpretation.
@ttg105 Feb 2022
Some unusual chord progressions and sounds ... very moody and a nice contrast with the more upbeat parts. Vocals in both languages very appealing! Great overall feel to this.
@franniezest Feb 2022
I really like how the verse rhythm goes well w the guitar style in that section. It all contrasts really nicely w the chorus :)
@arthurrossi Feb 2022
To write songs in French, Italian, German, no problem... but Japanese? I am severely impressed. Though my dad knows a bit Japanese, I have never known it is such a melodic language... Beautifully done!
@ballyhoot Feb 2022
Did you record this on your phone, because it sounds good? Very interesting and enjoyable to listen to. The harmonies work pretty well, rusty or not -- better than most of my attempts to harmonize.
@xfloorpunchx Feb 2022
Japanese language sounds so melodic! I really love all the little arrangements that you added, like the violin or the vocals harmonisations!
@gm7 Feb 2022
Very nice bounce to the sound and the harmony sounds good.