This is the first full song I've ever written. Thanks for listening. Ben.
This song is about a trip I had to Disney world makes sense now doesn’t it I just wanted to tell you listeners thank you
On my way to the car
I got my luggage with out a hassle,
now In to the air with me and myself,
now out of the air in to the new bus,
now to the hotel where nobody saw my happy good face
do do do do do do do do
now out of the air from 5,000 feet,
now to my happy house
@cts Feb 2022
1st thing - congrats on your inaugural FAWM tune! I can only wish I was as far along with composition structure and recording as you are. You've fleshed out your idea(s) and it reflects well in your recording. Looking to hear much more from you, Ace!
@zeekle1998 Feb 2022
This is so cool, such a fun song. Loved the do do do bits.
Keep writing!!
@timfatchen Feb 2022
I like the piano, and the playful lyrics. Keep going!
[another note to you: people who comment on this page may not revisit it and so won't see your 'thank you's". If you want to send thank you's--and you don't have to tho' it's often nice to--send them to the person's soundboard. Click on their name to get there.]
@theflyingace Feb 2022
@theodamus thank you. I love the doo doo doos. They're fun.
@theflyingace Feb 2022
@mattoxic thank you. I like the doo doo doos too.
@theflyingace Feb 2022
@dock I agree, thank you.
@theodamus Feb 2022
Nice work and congrats on your first song ever! I love how playful it is, the do dos are awesome and the piano is class. Great start!
@mattoxic Feb 2022
Love it.
Love the doo doo doops. Well done, and glad I listened.
@dock Feb 2022
Wonderfully simplistic, like coloring with crayons, except with music. fun!