Finally finished partial lyrics and put them to music.
Look for her in the tallest tower
When the evening song gets louder
Silver pins and hippie flowers
Tangled in her hair
Slip in through her open window
Silent as the summer wind blows
Past the veils and walls that echo
As she calls your name
All he wants
Is the love of a girl
To carry him away
All he wants
To the gate beyond the garden
Where the shadows and secrets darken
There’s no need to ask their pardon
In the pouring rain
Across the field and down the hillside
Hit the gas and hear those wheels slide
Toward the sunny, lonesome seaside
Shifting through the gears
All she wants
Is the strength of a boy
To carry her away
All she wants
All they want
Is the chance for love
To carry them away
All they want is
Hope
@cblack Feb 2022
This is beautiful. A credit to the genre. That melody, the honest-sounding vocals... They work together so, so well.
Great job! :)
@metalfoot Feb 2022
I like the imagery and structure to the lyrics and the melody is great, with the delightful guitar picking to undergird the song. Well done.