coming down again
coming down again
rising with the wind
coming down again
like the raven
I strike lightning to the mountain
black eyes
it's coming apart
I come down
upon your heart
gushing like a fountain
i fly into darkness
like the raven
I strike lightning to the mountain
black eyes
it's coming apart
I come down
upon your heart
gushing like a fountain=
i fly into darkness
this is an omen of your fate
i bring lightning like the raven
@fuzzy Feb 2022
Wow, you've accomplished a lot in such a short song!
The quieter lines are really effective.
Super great use of your voice as an instrument.
Nice work here for sure.
@metalfoot Feb 2022
Thought I had left a comment on this -- I loved the intensity of this track a lot!
@elesimo Feb 2022
I really liked the interplay between the synth and the percussion, it gives the song a feeling of marching and creates a nice tension. Like an army coming down from the mountains. Really nice!
@blackrose1313 Feb 2022
Awesome! Had a great beat to it.
@emplate Feb 2022
I really like this lyric line:
"like the raven
I strike lightning to the mountain"
Don't know if it's the raven thing, but I kind of hear Moonspell in the composition!
@aeye Feb 2022
The pause on I fly into darkness is really cool with the repeats. And then that was an unexpected but welcome change in vocal style about after it. Heavy!