Feb 2022 worship girl-with-guitar firstfruits
I stole the theme of firstfruits from @metalfoot- thanks!
It's a new day, it's a new page
This one's for you, this one's for you
It's a new chance, it's a new song
This one's for you, this one's for you
Every breath I have is a gift from you
In the valley you are there
You love me more than I deserve
In the darkness you hear my prayer
I don't have much to offer
But all I have is yours
More of you, less of me
My first fruit is yours
All I am is yours
It's a new day, it's a new page
This one's for you, this one's for you
It's a new chance, it's a new song
This one's for you, this one's for you
@paulmilne Feb 2022
Lovely sentiment set to a very catchy tune! Nice work.
@emory Feb 2022
I think it's really good the way you draw out the "I don't have much to offer" section by not ending on "My first fruit is yours" but extending that thought to "All I am is yours". This is a nice song!
@metalfoot Feb 2022
Oh, I do like that chord structure on the verse a LOT. Glad that the 'firstfruits' idea could inspire you. :)