Finally finished partial lyrics and put them to music.
All alone in this world
Like a mountain, like a pearl
There’s a line that’s been drawn
In between here and gone
Is it peace, is it war
Does it matter anymore
Who’s to say what is fair
It won’t lead us anywhere
We could fly
We could love
We could glide
Like hawks, like doves
Here we sit eye to eye
We could move we don’t try
Who’s to say what is right
Quiet mornings lonely nights
We could fly
We could love
We could soar
Like hawks, like doves
@tamsnumber4 Mar 2022
Very hypnotic and visual song, I really enjoyed it!
@unpronounceable Feb 2022
The guitar part makes me feel like I’m on a train (a comforting feel). This song makes me feel like I’ve just been through hell and now I’m moving towards safety and will soon be able to work on healing. I love it.
@tunecat Feb 2022
The song draws you in. It’s very ‘listenable to’ the chorus gives it the lift it needs jut at the right moment - like the outdo
@klyma Feb 2022
Really like this right here:
There’s a line that’s been drawn
Between here and gone
Is it peace, is it war
Does it matter anymore
Nice job on the chorus, too. Love the melody!
@christmascard Feb 2022
Lovely strumming pattern, a very soothing song. Great work
@middlec Feb 2022
This is such a peaceful song. I needed it. I really like how the music has a really full and insistent motion but your words are spare. It's a nice pairing.
@rayboneor Feb 2022
I like the way this moves along quietly, sort of hypnotically. And then the chorus really lifts off brilliantly. It's all very seductive, to my ear--and I love the way you finish