Feb 2022
Daughter
Do you have a little girl
A daughter just like mine
She’s been a special one for me
For a really long long time
When she was just so tall
She’d smile at me and laugh
She’d help me open letters
I got from my old staff
As she got a little older
So did our closeness grow
Whenever I could see her
It made the dark clouds go
When she found the one to marry
And we waited on the aisle
She was the shining beauty
Just look at that great smile
Things are not the same
She’s a married woman now
But we’ll never lose that love
It will stay with us somehow
@gilhari Feb 2022
very relatable... makes me smile as I reflect on my own relationship with my daughter. Nicely done.
@elesimo Feb 2022
This one is very sweet, and it tells such a lovely story!
@gordon Feb 2022
What a wonderful sentiment and so nicely written. I do hope you don't mind, but I couldn't resist. having a go. I will post it shortly and as ever, if I've missed the point, or you really don't like it, let me know. Happy Fawming this year sir!
@katestantonsings Feb 2022
I'm thinking of my daughter as I read this; she also makes the dark clouds go for me. Beautiful sentiments that flow eloquently. Nice work, @srcoops
@metalfoot Feb 2022
I do have a little girl... and she's not grown up yet... but I'm sure there will be some wistfulness when that day comes!